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quik
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since 2002-11-27
Posts 91
Dinwiddie,Virginia

0 posted 2002-12-03 11:02 AM


I Hate The Way

I hate the way you say you just don’t care
I hate the way you make my life miserable and things that are not fair
I hate the way when I get in trouble you call me crazy
I hate the you say your just “ Flat Out Lazy”
I hat the way you look at me all crazy, just because I answered a question straight back
I hate the way you just want to give me a good slap
I hate the way you don’t put my talent to no use
I hate the way you think everything is a plain ol’ excuse
I hate the way you just throw my talent down the drain
I hate the way you make me suffer with all this pain
I hate the way you think I’m going to get mad
I hate the way sometimes knowing that you’re my dad
I hate the way you call me “Stupid” or “Dumb”
How could you say that, I’m your Son
I hate the way you just give up on something that you can finish
I hate the way you know its something you can replenish
I hate the way you say “ I give up, I’m though”
I hate the way you say, “ I don’t want nothing to do with you
I hate the way you don’t think I’m going to change
I hate the way you think I’m just going to be the same
I hate the way you don’t want to guide me no more down the right route
Because if you were a real father you wouldn’t send your sons nowhere but keep him here and help him out!


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Star T
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since 2002-07-12
Posts 182
Philadelphia, US
1 posted 2002-12-03 11:21 AM


hey quik,i really feel for u on that poem.it was so expressive and well put together.stop hating ur dad ok...they just dont know how to show the love they so much feel.give him a chance will u...and u too try and be a better person for yourself and not for your dad's or anyone's sake.holla back! will u

p.s u were so mad while writing the poem u made quite a number of typo. errors.not to worry! the message comes perfectly across.


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