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zarina
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since 2001-05-19
Posts 180


0 posted 2002-12-02 07:36 AM


motel six
I still want you
go lurking around corners
give me more of that taste

motel six
I will haunt you
my mouth tries to speak
you're smoking another cigarette
I wont be the one holding you back
go on, you can play that guitar

motel six
do I taunt you?
I will be there when you fall
frozen lips, late in january

go chasing my fantasies

--- well, I have been long gone. But Im back   About this poem, I may have to edit it, I wrote what I could remember so that I could post it now.. The original lies at my computer at home. well, yeah, it is great to be back. Finally!   -----



I'm always myslef. Isn't that enough for you?

[This message has been edited by zarina (12-03-2002 06:22 AM).]

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banburycross
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since 2001-03-27
Posts 946
viginia
1 posted 2002-12-02 02:01 PM


this reminds me of something but im not quite sure what it is.  i like this though the working is very interesting... keep posting your work, glad youre back

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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