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Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

0 posted 2002-12-01 06:58 PM

Hey guys..I haven't posted in a while...so this may suck!
But hey..Im writing again...YAY!
*~*~*~*~**~*~*~**~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Every time I think,
I always end up thinking of you.
When I dream,
You’re always there.
I sometimes think,
That Life is to great to bear.
I just close my eyes,
You appear and put a smile on my face.
When you’re around me,
I don’t want to leave your side.
You’re always there,
I’m never scared when I’m with you.
On a piece of paper,
I repeatedly write your name.
My heart beats faster,
When I reach out for you.
When you’re around,
My heart screams out your name.
Now I’m not near you,
I’m out in an emotional storm.
Out in the cold,
The thought of you warms me.
I want to be safe from harm,
In your arms.
When you smile,
Everything in time has a meaning.
When you leave,
Everything turns dark and scary.
You take me away,
And lift me up.
Everyday I grow,
Closer to you.
Every word you speak,
Stays with me.
Wherever you go,
I will follow.
Simple because,
I can’t get enough of you.
Obvious I know,
But this had to be said.
No one understands,
How much you mean.
But let’s just leave it as,
So obvious.

Hope that will return one day,
Will be the cause of my sanity.
Until then I will be,
A lost soul looking for a place to rest.

[This message has been edited by Pollita (12-01-2002 07:24 PM).]

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

1 posted 2002-12-01 07:02 PM

I really love this!!!!! In fact I think it may be one of my favourites of yours. Very sweetly expressed sentiments. Keep up the writing and posting!!!!!
Luv, Liz xx

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

2 posted 2002-12-01 07:06 PM

Aww thank you soooo much!
I really love this poem...It means so much to me....
Hehehe and to think that who this is about is fairly obvious!
But yet..Know one knows who it is!...
Scary yet funny!...

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2002-12-01 09:12 PM

Heya I really like this

The emotions were... well, obvious (No pun intended) but it adds to the poem.
Good write

No, on second thought, let's not go to Camelot.
~ Arthur (Monty Python Search for the Holy Grail)
I'm Rhondiforous!

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2002-12-02 08:41 PM

Very awesome poem! You are a very good writer! Im sure alot of people can relate to this one.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are, too late to change?" -Dishwalla-

moonguardian2004
Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 64
MA, USA

5 posted 2002-12-02 08:49 PM

this has been my favorite poem that i have read. i totally relate. i hope i get to read more of ur poems. keep it up!
Meredith

anawnda
Member

since 2002-07-26

Posts 113

6 posted 2002-12-03 08:24 AM

ey havent visited piptalk for a long time and thispoem really made me smile because i really can relate to the emotions in it, thanks for showing me what ive been missing pollita. (((pollita))).

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

7 posted 2002-12-03 05:28 PM

Aww thank you everyone!!!!!!!!!
I will keep writing!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2002-12-04 02:42 PM

Pollita~
There is most definately a lot of emotion coming
through in this piece, and you've expressed it very well.
This is definately one of my favorites of yours.
Keep up the writing and I'll keep reading.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

rxyfxy04
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 54
lil' town in Virginia

9 posted 2002-12-04 06:58 PM

i really liked this... definitly the title. cant wait to read more from you.

RxyFxy04

Smoothy
Member

since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

10 posted 2002-12-04 08:17 PM

Great way to return to writing. I'd love to see more.

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

11 posted 2002-12-04 09:28 PM

quote:
Hey guys..I haven't posted in a while...

That sounds alot like my line!

(I disapear from piptalk for a month or so every now and then...) LOL. I loved this poem! The emotions came through loud and clear, I loved it! Keep on writin'!

Rich

"You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

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