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Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

0 posted 2002-12-01 12:05 PM

well today sucked, so here's my time to complain about it.

I don't even know if this qualifies as a poem. But I do know that it sucks and I don't like it, but I'm gonna post it anyway.

"$3.75"

here I am,
doing 60 on highway that I don't even know.
Sooner or later, I'm gonna end up in Norfolk.
I'll be there for about 45 minutes
before I turn around and ride for 3 more hours.
When I get home, the power will still be off.
I wont be able to post my poem on whatever web site it is that I post on.
I'm gonna hear songs on the radio and try to figure out which band it is but I wont be able to because I can't think straight.
I'm getting sick and I just sent my brother off to Providence for something stupid that he doesn't want to do.
When I get home, I'm gonna realize that I've lost all but $3.75 of my money and I wont be able to find it.

All in all, today sucked and the trip to Norfolk sucks.

Please, if you ever come to Virginia (if you don't already live here), DON'T GO TO NORFOLK!!!! It sucks and the drive down there is one of the most boring ones that there could possibly be.

-Stinky Twinkie is mad-

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2002-12-01 03:47 AM

You know, I really really like this. I don't know what it is about it, but I just really like it

No, on second thought, let's not go to Camelot.
~ Arthur (Monty Python Search for the Holy Grail)
I'm Rhondiforous!

EleanorMoonbaby
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since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

2 posted 2002-12-01 02:22 PM

Hey, we have a place called Norfolk here in Britain....... it's full of fields of potatoes, and not very interesting. Good poem though, sums it up.
Ellie The Evil Genius

"I'm terribly sorry ma'am, my karma just ran over your dogma"

snoduck
Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 99
Selah, WA

3 posted 2002-12-01 05:10 PM

its kinda.... well it reminds me of like a movie or somethin like that. I HOPE YOU FEEL BETTER!!!!

-Erica-

Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

4 posted 2002-12-01 09:26 PM

Thanks, it kinda reminds me of a movie too.

stephanie
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since 2002-11-15

Posts 33

5 posted 2002-12-02 11:40 AM

hey there stinky twinky...haha...naw i wouldnt classify it as a poem but it was good...sorry your day was so bad and i hope things get better...oh and guess what today is?...SENIOR SKIP DAY! WOOHOO...so i guess ill see you tomorrow =

crystal

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

6 posted 2002-12-02 12:24 PM

i would definetely classify this as a poem, i agree with skyfire i like this for some reason. the free verse has an interesting quality to it. oh and the drive to norfolk is more interesting if you go 460

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

7 posted 2002-12-02 04:01 PM

I went 460 and it was still horrible. I hate going through Sussex and Ivor and Waverly. you may not have to go that way but it's awful. I have to go down 40 for a little while too, which doesn't help. Why am I even posting this, you don't care about how I get to Norfolk. Like I said, Stinky Twinkie is dumber than sand.

Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

8 posted 2002-12-02 11:40 PM

yeah, I think you're right "stephanie" (or can I call you "steph"? hahaha). This isn't a poem at all. Maybe it's prose or whatever its called. It doesn't matter because it came from me and anything that comes from me is gonna be messed up in one way or another. I'm all out of thoughts now. I'm gonna go eat my couch.

-Stinky Twinkie-

roxywrestlegirl04
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since 2002-10-29

Posts 74
good ole DINWIDDIE

9 posted 2002-12-03 06:25 AM

now now travis......everything will be OK...haha...nice poem...or prose...whatever it is....this is definatly a peice that you are venting your anger in. haha...anywayz...good job...talk to you in school today!

live,love,and die...but take RISKS..thatz what makes life worth the living, love worth the heartache,and death the new beginning!

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

10 posted 2002-12-03 02:40 PM

Yea theres something about this that i really really like...nice job stinky

hehe

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

Smoothy
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since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

11 posted 2002-12-03 06:45 PM

Thanks for warning me. Next time I go up north I'll be sure to steer clear of Norfolk Virginia, which, by the way sounds like Purgatory to me.

HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

12 posted 2002-12-03 08:04 PM

Norfolk is THAT bad? Wow.. I gotta make sure I steer clear... that could be BAd!

"You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

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