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lildevil
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since 2002-11-21
Posts 47
missouri,usa

0 posted 2002-11-30 11:43 PM



what does it mean to have someone love you?
someone who will look past your front, and will be sure to put you in your place when to you to be placed there.

how do tou cope with the knowledge?
when you know you are with some one who can look past all of your problems and still feel the same way.

who will help you deal with those memories,and not turn around and run?
leaving you in a heap of tissues from the crying.

where would you have gone if this person wasnt there to pick you up?
to meet you head to head
and is just as afraid to see you a fail as you are of failing.

when will you open your eyes?
to see what you have in front of you.
to stop being so bull headed and let in a friend and your true love.
this i wrote for the closest friend in my life who will never let me get to airhaded and lose my way.


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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2002-12-04 04:56 PM



lildevil~
These are some very thoughtful questions on love and friendship.
I enjoyed reading this.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

aaron woodside
Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256

2 posted 2002-12-05 02:06 AM


I liked this.  I'm not exactly sure if this poem is supposed to be from you to your friend or the other way around but it doesn't really matter, because we all need a friend in our lives who will be there for us and help us to stay the course.  Good write.  Hope to see more from you soon.

Aaron Woodside

There are no great men, only men in great circumstances.

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