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lil cherry
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since 2002-10-02
Posts 86
Ont, Can.

0 posted 2002-11-30 12:02 PM


Shame
Denial
Despair
How could I have let myself do this
History repeating itself

Tears
Silence
Pain
Why couldn’t I say no
To all those familiar faces

Regret
Sorrow
Embarrassment
Why doesn’t it help anymore
It used to make things feel good

Empty
Alone
Sobbing
Was it worth it
Help me get through this


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vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2002-11-30 12:49 PM



lil cherry~
There is so much pain and remorse in this piece...it just aches.
I sincerely hope that you are all right, and if this
is 'personal', then know that you do have friends
here who care.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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since 2000-12-27
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Riding
2 posted 2002-12-03 03:52 AM


I don't know you, but anyway... hope things get better, and if you ever want someone to talk to, feel free to email me, okay?

No, on second thought, let's not go to Camelot.
~ Arthur (Monty Python Search for the Holy Grail)
I'm Rhondiforous!

WinterWren
Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
3 posted 2002-12-04 12:24 PM


Thats a very feeling poem. I like the format you put it in. I know how it is just to want someone to care. You have lots of people here who Im sure are willng to listen and care. Laugh often, love much, live well.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

Avis
Junior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 38
Raleigh, NC, USA
4 posted 2002-12-04 01:15 AM


Wow, I sure can relate.

Those sure are powerful words. I bet that you think that nobody can understand you either. Thats what I feel sometimes, but when I come in here and hear all these other people like me pouring their souls out, just like me, it makes me feel different; better.

These teenage years sure are tough on the heart. I belong on this forum. I belong here.
IM me at "Tempus Vivo" on AIM.

Peace and Love,
~KEV~

"An eye for an eye only leads to more blindness."
     ~Margaret Atwood

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