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Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26
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Dinwiddie

0 posted 2002-11-28 10:24 PM


If you're allergic to peanuts, you shouldn't read this.

Peanuts

Peanuts feel as sharp as a dull knife.
So smooth, not able to cut anything.
Boooooom picky pow
I brought my peanuts from a cow.
And they are as sharp as a dull knife
that used to be sharp but isn't anymore.

It's amazing how my poems seem to get worse and worse.  My almighty skills have diminished slowly since I came here. This forum is bad for the writer's mind (or at least mine).  But that's okay, I can live with it.
-Stinky Twinkie-

[This message has been edited by Stinky Twinkie (11-29-2002 04:27 PM).]

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Star T
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since 2002-07-12
Posts 182
Philadelphia, US
1 posted 2002-11-29 12:28 PM


hye stinky twinkie,i dont think this forum is bad for the mind at all,i think it HELPS u free the mind.helps u clear ur mind,helps u let go of ur innermost feelings.so do just that and u'll realize ur "almighty" skills are still in there somewhere.goodluck.
Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26
Posts 204
Dinwiddie
2 posted 2002-11-29 12:42 PM


all that may be true, but it's hurting me right now.

-Stinky Twinkie-

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