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Teen Poetry #6

whats life about?

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

0 posted 2002-11-27 08:49 PM

Sittting down here,
Wondering if this is all life has got for me,
If its only pain and no smile.
Only loneliness and no companionship.

Sitting here staring into space,
And dwelling in the past,
What i coulda changed,
What i coulda done differently.

Sitting here,
Wishing life could be so different,
And so much more better,
With all i want by my side.

Sitting here,
Wanting my love,
Right here by my side,
Instead of anything else.

Sitting here,
Shivering from the cold,
Wondering what life is really all about...

clve527
Member

since 2002-07-08

Posts 200

1 posted 2002-11-27 09:25 PM

Please proofread. Never good to have the very first word spelled wrong.

Casey

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

2 posted 2002-11-28 08:40 PM

I am not exactly sure if I liked the whole sitting here, sitting here repetitive line thing goin on....but an interesting concept none the less.

thanks for the read

Riley

Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you......

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