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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-11-27 05:42 PM



I am Jack's silence
I am Jack's pain
I am the steaming corpse in the grave.
I am Jack's beheaded body
I am Jack's cold hands
I am a waste of a human mind.
I am Jack's silent screams
I am Jack's fears
I am locked up inside where I can't be found.
I am Jack's sacrifice
I am Jack's free will
I am the reason Jack is dead.

This has nothing 2 do with hurting anyone, but its just a metaphor i'm using, so please dont take it out of the form, but if it has 2, then ...go ahead lol

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Dinwiddie
1 posted 2002-11-27 05:46 PM



LCBS
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Connecticut
2 posted 2002-11-27 05:50 PM


So we have another fightclubite?

I am Jacks smirking revenge...


either that or you think the same exact way as Tyler Durdan, if you dont know what Im talking about....go rent the movie


~Lis

Spine Grinder
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3 posted 2002-11-27 08:01 PM


i LUV that movie! but thats not where i got it from lol

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4 posted 2002-11-27 10:00 PM



Where DID you get it from then?     A curious mind wants to know!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-27-2002 10:07 PM).]

Spine Grinder
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5 posted 2002-11-27 10:30 PM


a friend suggested it 2 me

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6 posted 2002-11-28 03:04 AM


They probably got it from that movie, one of the best ever made.

*exits*

~Titus

"A life unexamined is not worth living."
                       -Socrates

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