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Teen Poetry #6

Another Masterpiece from the Stink Twink

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

0 posted 2002-11-27 05:40 PM

As with all my "poems", these have no real meaning or point and they don't go anywhere.

Tankfacefool

Vroom! Vroom!
The tank is coming.
Their eyes get wide
and they start running.
Cover is hard to find
in the middle of the desert.
They're going to be extinguished
but I give them an "A" for effort.

Flicky! Flicky!
The face is smiling.
They smile back and
"911" they start dialing.
Now befuddled,
he ran to the cactus,
drew a plan in the dirt
and then he attacked us.

Hum! Hum!
The fool is chopping.
No one cares,
so they continue shopping.
Off came his hat,
and shoes as well.
He turned into a bull
at the stroke of twelve.

I Am King of All Pale People

I wont sleep
until Santa waves to me
I want to him recognize me
in the presence of millions
I refuse to eat
I refuse to rest
until Santa waves to me
But for right now,
until Santa waves to me,
I will have to settle for Wonder Woman.

go ahead, tell me about how bad these are. seriously...go ahead, I want you too.

-Stinky Twinkie-

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

1 posted 2002-11-27 08:17 PM

Seriously? I dont know what i just read :-/

rxyfxy04
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 54
lil' town in Virginia

2 posted 2002-11-27 11:09 PM

boy.. ur crazy.. i like it though.. the first one is new!! and i love it. Well. look out for wonder women.. bye bye

RxyFxy04

roxywrestlegirl04
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 74
good ole DINWIDDIE

3 posted 2002-11-27 11:30 PM

all hail the king of all pale people...no matter how pointless your poems are...i LOVE them!!! you are hilarious!! keep it up...i think it would be INTERESTING to read a serious poem by you...i would prolly CRY...haha
LAYTA STINKY TWINKIE
LIZ

stephanie
Junior Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 33

4 posted 2002-11-28 08:51 AM

haha...ur poems r too funny, thats why i love them so much. you are right they definately dont have meaning but thats what makes them good to me...i liked em. keep it up. and i go with liz on the you writing a serious one....i think you should, but thats just my opinion. ttyl. love crystal

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