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Teen Poetry #6

Life

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

0 posted 2002-11-27 04:21 PM

Life,
What a pain,
When all to be known is regret.

Life,
What joy!,
When sometimes happiness u feel.

Life,
Such heartaches,
When all u ever get is a broken heart.

Life,
Ever so tiring,
When all one can do is worry.

Life,
A hiding place,
When all u wanto do is run away.

Life,
Full of little love,
When thats all there should be.

Life,
Sometimes peaceful,
When deep inside i know,
Soon it'll all be over.

And to heaven i'll go,
Where with Jesus i'll forever be.

And that alone,
Is what keeps me going...

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

1 posted 2002-11-27 04:35 PM

I liked the ideas expressed in this poem. Good job!
*Allison*

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2002-11-27 04:37 PM

Nice first post I really like it keep up the great work.
Lauren

cutie2005
Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA

3 posted 2002-11-27 05:26 PM

Thanks for the read it was really good! I like your expression in this!

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2002-11-29 05:22 PM

Star T~
Ah yes...I'm liking this very much...especially the ending.
Wonderful first post, and I hope to see lots more from you.
Welcome to Passions!
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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