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rxyfxy04
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0 posted 2002-11-27 01:02 PM


I felt once before
my heart turn cold.
A dark love experience
left me no longer bold.

All my heart sees
is that gray wall
with no open space
that covers it all.

Couldn't take it any more.
Prayed to the one above.
All I conclude now
is I'm scared to love.

Unless you sit n' think,
it is not that bad,
but then it all turns round'
you see what you had.

It is all over
I'v realized that fact.
So why can't I stand,
and have a strong back?

Strong enough to risk
and push back the fears,
but I'm still scared
of the falling tears.

Only with time
will I get the power
to again fall in love
without a thought of terror.

For now I'll just watch
all this love go by.
Have fun with this life
So never again will I cry.


© Copyright 2002 Krystle N. Williams - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2002-11-27 01:05 PM


A very sad but well done first post.  Welcome to Passions.  *s*
Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-11-27 01:05 PM



Welcome to Passions Krystle.  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

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3 posted 2002-11-27 01:07 PM


Strong enough to risk
and push back the fears,
but I'm still scared
of the falling tears.
************************
It's OK to be afraid.


Welcome to Passions!


Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-11-27 01:10 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Krystle, I can feel your heart crying out in this heartfelt and beautiful debut, sweet friend, we all send angel hugs your way and know as love will always find a way true happiness comes to you soon, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Krystle, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krystle, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-27-2002 01:10 PM).]

garysgirl
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5 posted 2002-11-27 01:12 PM


Krystle, even though this is sad, it has a lot of thought in it.
Thanks for sharing with us. I hope to see more of your work.
BTW.....WELCOME  TO  PASSIONS  IN  POETRY
I hope that you like it here.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Riley
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6 posted 2002-11-27 01:18 PM


Welcome to Passions....

Sad first post....:'(


Ri

Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you......

Sunshine
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7 posted 2002-11-27 03:55 PM



Stinky Twinkie
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8 posted 2002-11-27 04:46 PM


sweet jesus nicole..or should I say Krystle, I think these people like your poetry. I cant say anything bad about this poem at all (even though I tried very hard too come up with something...just kidding).  Excellent, may the security of the ducks be with you.
roxywrestlegirl04
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9 posted 2002-11-27 04:50 PM


hey hey....i LOVE your poetry...(you already know that)...this one is excellent...if im not mistaken...i think i just *might* know what/who...it is about!
           LUV YA LOTZ!!!
               LIZ

cutie2005
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10 posted 2002-11-27 06:39 PM


I really like this poem, it's very sad though!!! Keep up the good work and hopefully everything works out for you!

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!



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