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Teen Poetry #6

Torn

stephanie
Junior Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 33

0 posted 2002-11-26 10:23 PM

Your world is perfect
Everything is right
but to the world your life's
nothing but a fight.

You can't win for losing
and you're never on top
maybe for a second
but trust me you'll drop.

You'll fall back
and so far down
everything you thought perfect
for some reason isn't found.

That happiness you felt
so deep within your heart
was nothing but deception
your worlds been ripped apart.

You can't find the strength
to even smile anymore
your heart feels empty
your heart is torn.

roxywrestlegirl04
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 74
good ole DINWIDDIE

1 posted 2002-11-27 06:22 AM

"stephanie"..hehe....this is a great poem...it is completly true to an extent...i LOVE it!! keep up the great work!!
LIZ

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

2 posted 2002-11-27 03:33 PM

it was a well written poem but I didnt really like it. not that my opinion matters...

rxyfxy04
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 54
lil' town in Virginia

3 posted 2002-11-27 11:16 PM

tippy.. i hadnt read that one yet.. i like it though. hopefully you have cheered up though!! love ya girl

travis.. ur opinion does matter!lol

RxyFxy04

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

4 posted 2002-11-28 10:53 PM

pretty good

ri

Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you......

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