Challenge #3- Alright, so I'm late!!

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Challenge #3- Alright, so I'm late!!

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

0 posted 2002-11-26 02:22 PM

I'm a product of environment-
a little precious wonder.
Everyday, so different,
each morning start anew.
What I wanted yesterday,
I now could do without.
What sparked my interest for so long-
now just a small, chilling ember.
Never knowing what it is,
that throws me far off track.
'Procrastination Station'-
ALL ABOARD: seems labeled to my forehead.
Start things off with such a bang...
delays ensue with wimpers.
My head so lost among the clouds,
yet toes still scrape the dirt;
There is not much,
left to say.
Please, now hold on tight.
Strap yourselves on in and hope-
because with me you never know.
You might be in for a ride.

Thanks for helping me write again, I've been so busy lately is utterly ridiculous.

Hope this met the challenge.

"I keep looking, looking for something more." Sara Evans

[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (11-26-2002 02:23 PM).]

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

1 posted 2002-11-28 05:35 AM

quote:
'Procrastination Station'-
ALL ABOARD: seems labeled to my forehead.

haha loved that.

i think you did well on this Jenn. You met the challenge in my book. Hope you have time to keep writting. I miss seeing your poems in PiP.

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

Getting away, isn't Running away.

"The hurt that you try to hide, is killing me."

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

2 posted 2002-11-28 12:49 PM

Nice, met the challenge def. I agree with ks up there. I like that line * listens to song inside head **

Good work

Riley

Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you......

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-11-29 05:54 PM

Jenn~
No question about it.  You met the challenge beautifully!
I'm glad this helped you to get the ink flowing again.
You've done a nice job on this and I particularly enjoyed this...

    "My head so lost among the clouds,
     yet toes still scrape the dirt;"

Very nice...I like very much.
Thanks for responding to the challenge.
I hope to see lots more poetry from you.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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