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Teen Poetry #6

Eternaly yours

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

0 posted 2002-11-26 01:45 PM

"Eternaly yours"

I"m in love with
an angel
fallen from above
whose voice
rings
like chimes in the wind

I'm in love with
a girl
standing by my side
whose beauty
reigns
like stars above the see

I'm in love with
the one
i've always dreamt of
whose love
shines
like an everlasting sun within my heart

I'm in love with
you
the one who
takes away the emptiness
and replaces it with love
for all that you are
i am eternally yours
my angel
my love

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

1 posted 2002-11-28 05:32 AM

quote:
an angel
fallen from above
whose voice
rings
like chimes in the wind

quote:
a girl
standing by my side
whose beauty
reigns
like stars above the see

loved those lil bits. beautiful imagery in this LW. i hope she knows how you feel.

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

Getting away, isn't Running away.

"The hurt that you try to hide, is killing me."

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2002-11-29 05:28 PM

LoneWolf~
Oh...I like LOTS.
This is such a beautiful and romantic write.
You've penned it wonderfully, and I enjoyed the read.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

3 posted 2004-04-15 09:54 AM

i went to go search for all your listed poems.this particular one is GREAT.damn!makes me miss being inlove so much.

Jesus died that you might live...accept that and u shall be saved.

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