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Eternaly yours

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LoneWolf
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since 03-10-2001
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IL


0 posted 11-26-2002 01:45 PM       View Profile for LoneWolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for LoneWolf

"Eternaly yours"

I"m in love with
an angel
fallen from above
whose voice
rings
like chimes in the wind

I'm in love with
a girl
standing by my side
whose beauty
reigns
like stars above the see

I'm in love with
the one
i've always dreamt of
whose love
shines
like an everlasting sun within my heart

I'm in love with
you
the one who
takes away the emptiness
and replaces it with love
for all that you are
i am eternally yours
my angel
my love

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

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knightlyshadows
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since 04-14-2001
Posts 950
obscured vision


1 posted 11-28-2002 05:32 AM       View Profile for knightlyshadows   Email knightlyshadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for knightlyshadows

quote:
an angel
fallen from above
whose voice
rings
like chimes in the wind


quote:
a girl
standing by my side
whose beauty
reigns
like stars above the see

loved those lil bits. beautiful imagery in this LW. i hope she knows how you feel.

A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.

Getting away, isn't Running away.

"The hurt that you try to hide, is killing me."

vlraynes
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since 07-25-2000
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Somewhere... out there...


2 posted 11-29-2002 05:28 PM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes


LoneWolf~
Oh...I like LOTS.
This is such a beautiful and romantic write.
You've penned it wonderfully, and I enjoyed the read.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Star T
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since 07-12-2002
Posts 183
Philadelphia, US


3 posted 04-15-2004 09:54 AM       View Profile for Star T   Email Star T   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Star T

i went to go search for all your listed poems.this particular one is GREAT.damn!makes me miss being inlove so much.

Jesus died that you might live...accept that and u shall be saved.

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