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The Battle for Supremacy on the Desk
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The Battle for Supremacy on the Desk |
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Stinky Twinkie Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 204Dinwiddie |
My poem owns you. It is the greatest poem ever written. Just for the record, I am not 4 years old. clang clang clang clang bang bang biggy bang ching ching ching ching clicky clicky clicky ding boom bam bo bun I think the stapler just won -Stinky Twinkie- |
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stephanie Junior Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 33 |
hahaha....hey travis your poem was great! yeah right! ahahahaha....a poem about a stapler?? whatwere you thinking? you're too goofy for poetry! hahaa....im only kidding! this is crystal...lol...it was real good travis, real good =  |
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EleanorMoonbaby Member
since 2002-09-02
Posts 202England, UK |
I like, I like very much. So deep and soulfull...... (secretly cracks up laughing) Ellie "I'm terribly sorry ma'am, my karma just ran over your dogma" |
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lildevil Junior Member
since 2002-11-21
Posts 47missouri,usa |
nice poemi think well it made me laugh any way |
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stephanie Junior Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 33 |
were you serious about your dad?...im sorry to hear that if that was true. yeah it does suck, but probably more for you than me. |
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clve527 Member
since 2002-07-08
Posts 200 |
Is there a rule around here that everyone has to like every single poem? Casey |
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Stinky Twinkie Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 204Dinwiddie |
no, there is no such rule. or if it is, I dont know about it did you not like it? [This message has been edited by Stinky Twinkie (11-26-2002 10:39 PM).] |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
The only thing I took to was the stapler part. The whole poem was basically sounds, and I don't know if I like that much. I dunno. Pretty good write anywho.... Riley Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... |
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rxyfxy04 Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 54lil' town in Virginia |
hey travis... considering this was my idea i really like it!! haha.. good job. love, nicole RxyFxy04 |
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Stinky Twinkie Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 204Dinwiddie |
Riley: how can you not like the childish, stupid sounds? It took me so long to complete that and I put so much effort into it. haha  thanks Nicole...for the comment and the idea. I actually forgot that came from you...whoops! anyhoo, that is all. I'm leaving now  |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
I am just DROWNING in depth with this one!!!Just like everytime I see this smilie-  I begin to cry for it tells so much truth! LOL*Allison* |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Strrrrrrange. |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
me dunno Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... |
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