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devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

0 posted 2002-11-25 08:21 PM

What if there was no tomorrow?
What would you do?
Would you sit at home and cry
Knowing there is no more life
Would you go to see you loved ones
And drown in sorrow and despair
Would you let that special person know
How much you really care
Or spill your love and trust
To the one who you`ve never known to trust
And engagae in your long wanted love and lust
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Sorry if this is bad. I was just thinkin..What if there was no tomorrow? You know?
*Allison*

snoduck
Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 99
Selah, WA

1 posted 2002-11-25 08:30 PM

you really have nothing to be sorry about, this was a good piece, and it is true... what if there was no tomorrow? way to broaden your horizons, and be a sort of philosopher kinda sorta... it was a really nice read and i enjoyed it. its good though, it makes you think.

-Erica-

clve527
Member

since 2002-07-08

Posts 200

2 posted 2002-11-25 08:37 PM

You have thought about that along with 90% of country music singers.

Casey

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-11-25 11:36 PM

Hmm..wow these are really good questions..i have no idea what i would do actually...food for thought i guess..

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

4 posted 2002-11-26 08:17 PM

Umm...clve527-I hate country music.LOL
*Allison*

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

5 posted 2002-11-26 08:20 PM

who0o0oho0o0o!!!
A big PLUS for you!!!
I liked this.. it was different from what you usually write, but I liked it!!
I know what I'd do...

Yea but anyway..
The lined flowed,
and the rhymes weren't forced!!
GOOD GOOD GOOD!

Sorry it took so long.. I've been having problems with stuff..a little caught up in myself.
I'm sorry..
I've been selfish lately.
take care,

Sara
p.s..lol, me tooo!

"Close your eyes and begin to breathe.
Something's coming over me.
Lost to find, and a soul to keep.
Because you love me."
~finch~

[This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (11-26-2002 08:21 PM).]

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

6 posted 2002-11-26 08:31 PM

The Little Mermaid rocks!!!
*Allison*

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

7 posted 2002-11-27 12:58 PM

Age old question expressed on paper. Goodjob.

Riley

Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you......

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

8 posted 2002-11-27 04:35 PM

I really like this piece it really made me think about what if there is no tomorrow. Well keep up the awsome work I can't wait to read more.

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

9 posted 2002-11-27 04:47 PM

hey u did a good job.made me think.what if there really was no tomorrow???i'll cry,laugh,celelbrate and mourn all together.i dunno what i'd do.let me think...love that piece girl!

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

10 posted 2002-11-27 05:03 PM

Thank you!!!!! *bows shyly* LOL
*Allison*

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

11 posted 2002-11-27 05:59 PM

hey,
this was really good
*clears throat* there might be a lil dust on the bottle.....
thas the only good country song in my opinion
but this isnt the only good poem of yours(haha i liked that)
all of ur poems are merci i think that means good, sara help me out here, u take french too, but wait allison u know cuz of that note in math class lol
this is really long but o well i want to type but w/e means good or great in french is what ur poems should be called, u know y??
cuz i'm a criminal...(sry i had to it is part of an eminem song and u know me, obsessive, i admitted it !!! yippee for me lol, u wouldnt let me write that but o well no hard feelings, ok this is reallllllllllly long and i am runnin out o' things to say)
but happy turkey day and somethin that explains it all
great poem!!!
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

12 posted 2002-11-27 06:03 PM

WOW SAM! What a LONG reply! LOL --"we" means yes..."merci" means excuse me..right? LOL But hey...What do I know?
*Allison*

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

13 posted 2002-11-27 06:20 PM

oopsie oops
merci is thank u but bien is good i member now!!

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

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