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punkrockerrobin
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0 posted 2002-11-25 03:53 AM


today is the day
we join hands and say i do
i dunno where i'd be without you

everyone is coming to see us
on this special day
my nerves are spinning

i know i made the right choice
when i choose to be with you
so today i say i do

i see you so happy looking at me
as i walk down the isle
with your dad beside me

it's just how i dreamed
with you and me
i love you and you love me

on this special day
together forever we will be
i can't belive this is happening

today is the day
we went through it together
and forever together we wil be

hey all no i'm not married but getting there this poem is for my dan i love you babe! (no ti it's not you lol!)



you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all

[This message has been edited by punkrockerrobin (11-25-2002 03:55 AM).]

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lildevil
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1 posted 2002-11-25 07:47 AM


good poem your boyfriend is lucky to have some one who cares so much

vlraynes
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2 posted 2002-11-25 04:59 PM



Hi there Robin.
I enjoyed this very much.
It's great to see you popping in again and
I'm glad to see you sounding so happy too.
Stick around for awhile, okay?
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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3 posted 2002-11-25 05:09 PM


ahh marriage isnt it great? well i wouldnt know nore do i want to anytime soon but you express your feelings well... what a lucky guy
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4 posted 2002-11-25 05:19 PM


Big big hugs, chicly

No, on second thought, let's not go to Camelot.
~ Arthur (Monty Python Search for the Holy Grail)

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5 posted 2002-11-25 09:37 PM


someday, maybe i'll get married.  until then, i'll just read this poem over and over.............


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6 posted 2002-11-25 11:17 PM


HI! Congratulations... hopefully, someday.

Kielo

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-Morey Amsterdam

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7 posted 2002-11-25 11:26 PM


Awww sweet poem robin I really liked it!!

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

punkrockerrobin
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8 posted 2002-11-26 04:51 AM


hehe sorry i haven't been around much i keep going in and out of the hospital! rhonda dear email me my msn is all messed up.

you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all

cutie2005
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9 posted 2002-11-27 11:04 PM


This poem is great! I loved it sooo much! Thanks for sharing and Good luck with your "soon to be" mariage!

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!



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10 posted 2002-11-28 10:27 PM


sweet little poem

enjoyed


ri

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