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True Intent |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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What other eyes do You entrench in ills of blackened flame that grip such beauty but to wrench it into evils name Why place such things upon this rock to soothe the pressing truth that we are crushed beneath the clock that ticks away our youth Beneath the green of rolling hills and endless waves of blue Unsettled liquid fire spills the true intent of You |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
I can feel where this is coming from! Thanks! Subtle, and short...I like it! Rayndpnugah; ruf luimt E ajan pa cu cdibet... |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
"Why place such things upon this rock to soothe the pressing truth that we are crushed beneath the clock that ticks away our youth" Definitely my favorite. I'm not so sure why I liked this so much, but at least you know I do. Good work. Laura "I have seen what a laugh can do. It can transform almost unbearable tears into something bearable, even hopeful." |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
This was beautiful. You presented a lot of great imagery! Good one!  *Allison* |
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Nazera29 Junior Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 34Connecticut |
probably my favorite ever kev *We are the hero in our own story* |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kevin~ Excellent, as always. Much enjoyed. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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