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lil cherry
Member

since 2002-10-02

Posts 86
Ont, Can.

0 posted 2002-11-23 09:48 PM

My life’s only one true desire
I desire thee more than anyone in existence
My heart squeezed a little bit more
With each word that escapes thy lips
Those lips that I so long to kiss
To feel their sweet remedy
To any pain I have ever endured
With every sunrise my thoughts turn to you
Your voice, your words, your touch
Salty tears down my cheeks
Could things be different
I think it not
My sorrow shall continue
But my hope shall also live on
Hope and pray for the day
That the sorrow will be erased
My loves eyes penetrate deep into my soul
Sliding into my thoughts
Gliding through my dreams
Like clouds through the sky
The touch, the sweet caress
Sends thrills up and down my spine
The warmth of a lover’s touch
Like a gentle kiss on every inch of my flesh
My hearts rhythmic beating
Seems to whisper your name
Sounding it out slowly and softly
With every step I take
I progress slightly further away from you
Each raindrop a reflection of how handsome you are
Falling on my flesh and mixing with my tears
Salty and yet sweet
My life’s one true desire

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

1 posted 2002-11-24 07:30 PM

that was so endearing. so sweet, yet sad at the same time. you wrote this well angel. it had a good flow, and the imagery was great.

loved this lil bit:

quote:
My hearts rhythmic beating
Seems to whisper your name
Sounding it out slowly and softly
With every step I take

beautifully done!

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

Getting away, isn't Running away.

"The hurt that you try to hide, is killing me."

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2002-11-25 04:09 PM

lil cherry~
This is such a beautifully written and romantic piece.
knightlyshadows already pointed out my favorite lines,
so I won't repeat them...though I do love them.
I'm thinking this is my favorite of yours so far.
I can't wait to read more.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

lil cherry
Member

since 2002-10-02

Posts 86
Ont, Can.

3 posted 2002-11-26 08:33 PM

thanks so much!

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