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Teen Poetry #6
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lildevil
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since 2002-11-21
Posts 47
missouri,usa
0 posted 2002-11-23 07:26 PM


Plans never committed to
Breaking down life
Bringing unforgivable blight.
Rue building up
In everyone’s mind
Breaking down the walls
Bringing out anger this time.
It is all unknown
Until force brings it out.
Learn that you never forgive
And there’s no
Light at the end.
Cause of promises broken
© Copyright 2002 tammy barlet - All Rights Reserved
knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 791
obscured vision
1 posted 2002-11-24 07:26 PM

Loved the opening of this. Had good flow to it, as well as good word usage. You wrote this well. Keep writing, keep posting.
(welcome to PiP btw)

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

Getting away, isn't Running away.

"The hurt that you try to hide, is killing me."
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