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lildevil
Junior Member

since 2002-11-21

Posts 47
missouri,usa

0 posted 2002-11-23 06:48 PM

i am kind new at posting any poetry of my poetry so please dont be to harsh.

What is it like
To wake up at night
Not knowing what caused it.
Was it a dream that woke you?
Was it just a shadow across your face
Or has your mind curtained it out.
Maybe you dreamed about the future,
Or maybe it’s a memory that should not be forgotten
God only knows why.
Its just an experience
The should be learned from and fully rembered.

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

1 posted 2002-11-23 07:19 PM

welcome to pip.

there is only one here who I know would be harsh outside of the crit. anal. forum where you should post your work if you want more than casual comments.

please post more and comment also, i am certain you will enjoy it here.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

2 posted 2002-11-23 07:21 PM

I'm enjoying your work so far! Be sure to post more! Welcome to Passions!!!

Rayndpnugah; ruf luimt E ajan pa cu cdibet...

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

3 posted 2002-11-23 08:04 PM

good write and thanks for sharing.

be sure not to post too much close together, and don't forget to reply as well.

can't wait to read more.

/jen/

i'm so bitterly disappointed. betty, i think it's time you leave now.

[This message has been edited by quietlydying (11-23-2002 08:04 PM).]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2002-11-25 04:55 PM

lildevil~
I enjoyed this first post of yours and I hope
to see lots more from you.
Welcome to Passions!
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

5 posted 2002-11-25 05:13 PM

I would be harsh if there was anything to be harsh about but this was really bood Welcome i dont know if my code worked but all well

PrincessNets
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

6 posted 2002-11-25 08:08 PM

This was a great first post! Welcome to Passions!

-Jeanette-

snoduck
Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 99
Selah, WA

7 posted 2002-11-25 08:35 PM

wow! great post and welcome to passions. i'm really looking forward to reading more... you're good.

-Erica-

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

8 posted 2002-11-25 11:29 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

life is full of so many unanswered questions and this is one of those poems that i think falls in that category. I liked it a lot and i think you did a great job for one of your first poems. I am looking forward to reading more from you

thanks for sharing and i hope you enjoy your stay!

Check ur e-mail for a special greeting

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

lildevil
Junior Member

since 2002-11-21

Posts 47
missouri,usa

9 posted 2002-11-26 12:03 PM

thanx every one i will most definatly be posting more

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

10 posted 2002-11-26 08:25 AM

Ok, so I am a little late replying. First off,

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!

Great first post, and you'll love it here. We aren't very harsh. Not most of the time anyway

....I can't wait to read more
Riley

~*I found how to laugh, forgot how to smile, somehow your words, make it all worthwhile*~

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