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Lisa_bebe15
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since 2001-11-15
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0 posted 2002-11-23 02:26 PM


If I walked away from you,
Would you run to catch up with me?
Or stand there looking up at the sky,
And wonder what you did wrong.

If I stopped smiling for you,
Would you tickle me to death, to make me smile?
Or simply hold me until I say I'm ok?
Or would you just ask me where my wonderful smile went?
And tell me how much you love me.

Would you be able to survive if I wasn’t happy?
Or would you die inside knowing I'm not happy?
When I'm happy it’s that feeling inside that you get,
Knowing I'm truly happy with you.

Every time you look at me,
Knowing I'm yours and you are mine,
That feeling comes back to you,
And you just can't help to wonder,
Wonder if this relationship is perfect in every way.
Every little thought counts,
Every little touch counts.

When will all this end?
Can we even say this is going to end?
Only time can tell us how long this is going to last,
But another major part of this,
Is our love for each other.

"Water Over Matter"

© Copyright 2002 Lisa Ann - All Rights Reserved
CloudedDreams
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since 2002-11-23
Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm
1 posted 2002-11-23 05:10 PM


This is really good. It is so familiar with me... Love and how it will be, how will it start, how will it end, and How long will it last. Very good, Keep the good stuff coming! ^.^

Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it?

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