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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
A taste I'd thought I'd only think of. I feeling I'd only imagined I'd imagion. Arms entwined together. Lips applying pressure. Pull me out of this mess- Or drown the coward in me. I need to grow ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- by the way-when i say grow... i mean emotionally and mentally, (and my self-confidence level, as well) even though I am pretty short, (compared to him at least) but yea.. you get the point. This was short. (lol, my message is longer than the poem!!) heh.. yea.. thanks for reading. ~sara~ Close your eyes and begin to breathe. Something's coming over me. Lost to find, and a soul to keep. Because you love me... |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
hey domer, this was good awwwwwww the kiss how sweet (what to think lololol) this was good he scraes me tho he needs to sleep ~samantha~ "sometimes i just feel like |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Shut up, dont talk crap about my white friend with black hair! lol (no, not Alex brandon) He said he wants to look dead.. but he looks better without it. He was talkin to some girl this moring.. omg, i was crushed.. But he made up for it!! HE's prolly be calling me right now, but we're on the phone cuz ur dumb and we have to talk until 10. whatever man, Sara [This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (11-22-2002 09:34 PM).] |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
omg sara this is kewl but yea he scarez me too i agree with sam give him up man lol just my opinion hez really weird.... good poem bals ska dot  "I am who I am who I am who am I?" |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
GIVE HIM UP!?!?! He means so much to me! He kissed me, I kissed him, we kissed, how can i give him up? I would prepare a self-sacrifice before i gave him up.. ok!? I don't care if you guys like him. (not that i dont care about you.) but i care about him a lot.. I really like him, and he means so much to me.. so what- he's not 'main-stream', i dont care... ah!! now you got me rambling! ahh!!  thanks ne way tho !sara! |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Am I the only one NOT afraid of him that thinks he is just as normal as anyone else??? I guess so..LOL This was really nice Sara..I asked for details and I ot `em. LOL I think it was awesome how you desplayed your feelings! Go you!!!!!!!  *Allison* P.S. When do I get my kiss that I write a poem about!  Darn that Rex!!! LOL |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
lol, Allison, you don't have to lie to me... I know he's not as normal as everyone else, and I'm not afraid to admit that... because I'm not either..? (lol) I didn't add a lot of details in this, because my nervousness distorted my memory. which kinda sucks. CATHY AND SAM ARE SOOO MEAN, THOUGH MAN!! but anyway, thanks ALLISON, for reading. lol ~sara~ ps..you'll get your kiss sometime, allison, i promise!!! lol "Close your eyes and begin to breathe. |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
I don`t think you should give him up!!! Go for the gold! I am such a dork...I have no love life so I want other ppl to have one!  *Allison* |
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CloudedDreams Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210My Fantasy Realm |
I know how you feel, LOL. But anyway, the poem was very good. It may be short, but everything put together paints a beautiful picture in mind. you're doing great ^.^ Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it? |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Allison- at least there's on insane person like myself here!!! (lol) go for the gold, eh?? That's illegal! lol ahahahaaaaa. omg, i'm fine. NE way... yea.. you'll get a love life soon, with 'that hottie rex cullen' lol thanks allison. CouldedDreams- Thanks!! I dont know you, but I'm gonna go read sum of your poetry since you're soooo nice! lol. I'm glad you have a pretty picture in your head now!!  tahnks everyone again.. (cept sam and cath cuz they're so mean!! j/j) "Close your eyes and begin to breathe. |
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lildevil Junior Member
since 2002-11-21
Posts 47missouri,usa |
THE POEM IS GOOD BUT DONT GIVE YOURSELF UP FOR JUST A KISS NO MATTER WHAT HE LOOKS LIKE LOVE DEPENDS ON SO MUCH MORE |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
in case you're wondering, we do have the piptalk lounge. it's more for gossip than the poetry forums. or perhaps email. /jen/ i'm so bitterly disappointed. betty, i think it's time you leave now. |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Hehehe go for the gold..I didn`t mean it THAT way. lol. I really don`t see whats so wrong with him..I`m so confoozled! He jut wears black and looks sleepy dats all...I dunno maybe ppl should stick to their own love lives and keep thier noses in their own buisness..I hate it when ppl bean in..Like on a conbversation or sumtin..or your LOVE life! OMG!!! This reply is gettin LOOOOOOONG So I guess I`ll talk to you when you get online! Sleepy head! *Allison* |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
ok if ppl r gonna be like this then maybe i just shouldnt say anything about jon would that be better for us all???i didnt mean anything by it but i guess u and allison took it differently anywaz bals ska dot "I am who I am who I am who am I?" [This message has been edited by foreverwithyou (11-24-2002 05:15 PM).] |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
LilDevil- we're dating.. it's really hard to explain and i'm not going to try to.. but yea,, you are right, but it's not like that between us..thanks for reading though! lol QuietlyDying- Are you saying I talk to much? lol -I might check it out... Allison- SleepyHead?? Right.. ne way- yea.. okay.. um.. oh yea.. I'm NOT going for the gold, and YOU'RE beaning in!! lol j/j, i dont mind. Cath- Don't get bent out of shape.. i already yelled at Sam about this.. it's just that i don't really appreachate you talkin poo about him.. i mean- you go ahead and think what you want, and look at us funny when we're together at school, or whatever.. I dont care, and I'm pretty sure Jon won't care either- because we talked about how people think it's weird.but i mean- just dont say anything rude about him around me.. then eveything will be PEACHY!!!! thanks everybody. |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Cathy-I wasn`t even talkin about you..I was talkin about someone else..I am not gonna name names..So don`t get upset..I was also just sayin that I hate when ppl bean in..I wasn`t talkin bout you....I mean...I was statin my opinion..That`s what this site`s about right??KK? *Allison* |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
no, i'm saying you're treating this forum like a gossip session. not what it was intended for. i for one don't appreciate the negative feelings that it creates and would prefer it if you kept your gossip to yourselves. it's inappropriate to talk of someone without their knowledge in the fashion that you are. if you're into that kind of thing, then fine. but please, keep it out of the poetry forums. it's a private thing. /jen/ i'm so bitterly disappointed. betty, i think it's time you leave now. |
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