Teen Poetry #6 |
Perfect Boy |
devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Perfect eyes Smiing brightly in their own way Perfect lips Speaking words in ways only dreamt Perfect breath Breathing softly down my neck Perfect Boy I wish he was mine I wish he was real ____________________________________________________ Sam,Cathy and Sara..You know who this is about.... But he is real I just cant have him.... Darn that hotness of his!!!!!!!!! LOL *Allison* |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
P.S. Sorry if this stinks My muse is on vacation I guess..LOL *Allison* |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Hey! I thought I wanted something I could never have, but now I have it!!! well.. except this whole, aaron, mom, and dad thing.. a slight disfunction, but who cares..lol! Ne way.. I like this... You like his breath on ur neck.. lol. yea ne way, i'm gonna add this to my librbary, cuz it remends me of stuff... heh.. ~sara Close your eyes and begin to breathe. Something's coming over me. Lost to find, and a soul to keep. Because you love me... [This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (11-22-2002 06:49 PM).] |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
hey, thank u for giving me the opportunity to use this smilie: this poem doesnt stink and i like this one but this was good! and hey he talked to u today thats a start! never give up hope lol that sounds funnny ~samantha~ |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
So tell the truth, this is about kevin I'm kidding, but hey hes irresistable, its in the genes This doesnt "suck" it shows how you feel about this "perfect boy." He sounds great... ~lisa And this little masochist, she's ready to confess |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
this was awesome allison!!!i no that it told how u felt cuz u told be about it today i think that he prolly likez u even if he dont yet....he likez u the tinyest bit.unfortuatly john dont like me but thatz ok if rex dont work there r otherz but whut did i tell ya?!?rex will be ur best bet!!! CAthy |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
JOHN LIKES YOU CATHY!!! As Amanda said..he`d be crazy not to! But he isn`t crazy!And if he is they hav pills for that right?? LOL LCBS-NO...this isnt about kevin..I seem to have given up on kevin..LOL But yea..he is perfect...*sigh* *Allison* |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Allison~ I like this. Short, sweet and to the point, yet it doesn't lose it's message. Nicely done. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
aww... i was reading this poem, and my old reply, and now I'm all sad... good poem still! "Close your eyes and begin to breathe. |
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