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Sweetpoet16m4u04
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since 2002-11-10
Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

0 posted 2002-11-22 04:37 PM



Inside of Me
Deep down inside of me,
Are feelings that I can no longer hide.
They are for that special girl,
The one that I care for and I adore.

I don’t know how I can make her see,
That if we were together it would be destiny.
It’s not like I can’t tell,
Because when I’m around her my heart begins to swell.

She is everything I could possibly want and need,
Yet to her together we will never be.
I really love her with all my heart and soul,
As my emotions continue to flow.

Deep down inside of me,
Are feelings I can no longer hide.
They belong to that one special girl,
The one I care so much for and adore.

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PrincessNets
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since 2002-10-30
Posts 103
NewYork, USA
1 posted 2002-11-22 10:17 PM


Sweetpoet16m4u04,
    First I want to say thanks for posting a reply to my poem. Next, I have to say that I really enjoyed reading this poem.  I know how you feel!  I've gone through those feelings many times.  If you ever need to talk, I am here!  Good write, Great Job!
  -Jeanette-

[This message has been edited by PrincessNets (11-22-2002 10:19 PM).]

CloudedDreams
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since 2002-11-23
Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm
2 posted 2002-11-23 04:49 PM


Ah---love, that warm and fuzzy feeling that drwas us close.  This is great, it expresses what so many people feel everyday. It's one of those poems that make love being in love. Keep it up! ^.^

Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it?

lildevil
Junior Member
since 2002-11-21
Posts 47
missouri,usa
3 posted 2002-11-23 09:19 PM


GREAT POEM IT STRICKS A CORD THAT I KNOW EVERY ONE HAS HAD TO FEEL AT ONE TIME OR ANOTHER
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