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branden726
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0 posted 2002-11-22 09:35 AM


My name is Branden,
I've been through alot,
Its about time I realized Im back on top,
Everytime something happens to me,
I go to a place where I feel free,
A place called pip,
A place I call home.

My name is Branden,
Ive been here long,
Many dont know me,
So here I go.

Im 17,
Still a teen,
Brown hair,
Brown eyes,
5'5",
Im such a small guy,
I weigh in at weight unkown.
P.s. best i could do

© Copyright 2002 Branden Jacobs - All Rights Reserved
aries_luv_ppl
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1 posted 2002-11-22 01:06 PM


that's kinda cute. what was the challenge about? Hey your poem get a nice shape.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (11-22-2002 01:10 PM).]

branden726
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2 posted 2002-11-22 05:53 PM


the challenge was something about writting about yourself to let ppl know its a little icon up towards the top it says "challange"
vlraynes
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3 posted 2002-11-25 05:38 PM



Hi there, Branden.
I enjoyed this response to the challenge.
It's great to see your name in the blue pages again.
I hope to see lots more from you.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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