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snoduck
Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 99
Selah, WA

0 posted 2002-11-22 12:17 PM

Hey guys its Erica! Sorry about the name change thing, but i forgot my password to my other name (ericaisamonkey) and then i forgot my email password, so yeah. This is some of my latest, hope you like it!!!

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I'm sorry
I want to say that
A million times
Just to hold you again
I remember your lips
Always soft and smoothe
I'm crying now
Because of you
Your hurtful words
Burned me bad
Scars
Are all that are left
I can't stand the thought
Of not having you
To hold, and talk to
I want you back
I fell head over feet
And you left me
To bleed to death
Alone
Yet I still want to appologize
But I seem to have lost the words
That I once cherished so deeply
I still love you
I will always love you
But for that I regret
So I send my appologies.

wvplayernotreally
Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 215
yakima wa

1 posted 2002-11-22 12:35 PM

Hey good first post it was GREAT! i love the lines-
"Just to hold you again
I remember your lips
Always soft and smoothe
I'm crying now
Because of you"
Wow i can understand that more then you will know! Keep up the good work...i am looking forward to it

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

lildevil
Junior Member

since 2002-11-21

Posts 47
missouri,usa

2 posted 2002-11-23 07:08 PM

thanks for writing this i know where you are comeing from i still miss my ex and i so wish me and him could get back together

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-11-25 01:30 AM

snoduck~
Welcome back, Erica.
There is much well-expressed emotion in this piece.
you've done a nice job on this and I hope to see lots more from you.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes