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foreverwithyou
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0 posted 2002-11-21 06:06 PM


It doesn't move
It doesn't speak
It doesn't eat
It doesn't drink
What is this mystery thing you say?
It's love and it's here to stay.

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

© Copyright 2002 Cathy - All Rights Reserved
dinky
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since 2002-10-19
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1 posted 2002-11-21 06:11 PM


for some odd reason this made me want to laugh(not cuz it was bad or anything it just was some power that over came me sry),
but it was realllllllly good
so u r still postin eh?
good!
~samantha m.~ (know what the m is for ? lol i'm j/j)

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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2 posted 2002-11-21 06:22 PM


Mumba?
ooo, lol, i get it.

Anyway Cathy.. i enjoyed reading this, because it didnt take long...lol.

Yea.. i thought u were gonna quit posting! lol, j/j,i don't mind.. i like reading.

omg, guess what!

Dances are gay!!
muah ha ha..

ttyl

devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28
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3 posted 2002-11-22 06:48 PM


Cathy-This made me think you were talkin about some strange gremlin in the beginning and then its like "No no Alison she`s talkin bout LOVE" LOL Good one!
Sam- Umm I`ll take Mathers for $1,000
Sara-Go sara Go sara!!!!!!!!! Now that I have learned of the daily events!!!!!!!! I am soooo happy 4 u!!!!!
         *Allison*

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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4 posted 2002-11-22 08:03 PM


OMG YOU TOO CATHY!!!
You're just as bad as SAM!!

IT makes me soooooo mad when you dont reply to your replies on PIP.. just do it man!!
Especially whent he three coolest people (especially me) reply to ur poem, and you pay us no mind!?
What the hesse, jeff besee!?
lol

I wanna go to arby's.. and get me some....fries.lol ew no, that sounds gross... lol

ttys!

AND REPLY DARN IT!

"Close your eyes and begin to breathe.
Something's coming over me.
Lost to find, and a soul to keep.
Because you love me."
~finch~

branden726
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5 posted 2002-11-22 08:07 PM


Ya know i like this poem its short and sweet but one thing ive learned is love is always here to stay... Just not with the person you wish it was with
foreverwithyou
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6 posted 2002-11-22 09:23 PM


thankz guyz for replying meanz a lot SARA R U HAPPY NOW??? yes i feel so happy for u too!!u must have been so excited!!!

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

vlraynes
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7 posted 2002-11-25 02:12 AM



Cathy~
I like this a lot...very cute, as well as true.
Nicely said.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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