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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... 
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What am I going to do with you? Someone, something, please tell me. I'm lost out here in this web of words, this maze of bloody vessels and broken records. What am I to do with this? A beautiful sparrow has landed, yes, landed and thusly spoken. It's spoken to me, of love and lust. I'm damned either way, enticed by my curse, lulled to something akin to peace by my curse's twin, called blessing. I seek warmth and shelter as I'm learning vague and rhythm. Walking my enlightened specks of dirt, I seek to bring you along... a concertina in my pocket, burning a trail to my depths. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
i liked this alot. it wwas very nicely written. btw whats a concertina? regina |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Titus~ This is such an intense write, and so filled with emotion and confusion. You've expressed the feelings very well. I hope things are working out for you, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
There IS a reason I haven't replied yet. I'm not going to tell you yet though *grins*  I'm here for you, you know that? Like Vicky said, you expressed your feelings very well in this one... or whatever she said that was similar to that. *grins* Another well done write, my friend  *~* Nia No, on second thought, let's not go to Camelot. |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Very well done Titus. You write very powerfully...Kielo |
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