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wvplayernotreally
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since 2002-11-06
Posts 215
yakima wa

0 posted 2002-11-19 10:59 PM



I just found out a girl from my church died during surgery. I found out less then an hour ago. Patty this is for you your in a better place. Thank you for your smile and support.

I remember you and Don
Such a couple
I wanted to be like you
You and your smile

You were strong
You had faith like no one
I loved your hugs
You constant "Hello Malloree's"

They went to fix your heart
But to me it was fine
You had such a heart
Love filled it to the brim

I still expect you see you
at church, behind me
I will welcome you next week
I will sing for you

You love our singing
Patty you helped me
more then you will ever know
Tell me how Heaven is alright

Thank you for telling me
that I touched your heart
that one day i spoke
you will touch mine everyday

Your in Gods hands now
Singing to him, talking
I know you love that
put in a good word for me

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

© Copyright 2002 Malloree - All Rights Reserved
Darkness
Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.
1 posted 2002-11-20 07:25 AM


I'm sorry for the loss of your friend. I have never really lost a friend but I can say I feel your pain. You made me feel it in this poem it was beutiful.

IM me if you wanna talk

Darkness

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
2 posted 2002-11-25 12:10 PM



wvplayernotreally~
It's never easy when someone we know dies,
and you've expressed the emotions very well.
This is a wonderful tribute to your friend.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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