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MissKlarmic
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since 2003-02-20
Posts 70
Canada,N.S

0 posted 2003-06-10 09:49 AM



A constant life of pain a constant loss of love
A millions smiles , glances, approached words
None meaning as much as yours.
At a constant loss without you, the worlds come to a bitter end
The light in my eyes has demolished, the light in my life is gone
how can it be for the best , some people don't want to be alone and rest
Some people want to live with the one they love ,grow old and sing of the one they love.
Life's always been unfair but as long as he was there it didn't matter i didn't care.
Now I'm alone , hes forgotten about me , if only he could see my heart bleed
Maybe he would see hes all i really need.

© Copyright 2003 Lesley Anne Crowe - All Rights Reserved
BrokenDreams
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since 2003-02-09
Posts 425
In The Clouds
1 posted 2003-06-10 10:25 AM


I really like this. It sucks when you depend on someone's love only to find out that they don't love you at all. Sorry about your situation, but nice write anyway.
::Jen::

If you listen hard enough silence can mean more than words.

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