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jennilynn Junior Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 29here with me |
I sit And wait And watch. Just waiting For the time when I can pounce. Leap upon him And scratch, hiss, bite. Beat him until he lies motionless On the floor. Surrounded by a pool of blood. I have done my job. So I leave. Off to find another Victim. For I am the mighty hunter. Always ready to pounce. Always waiting For that one to come and share in my pain, anger, passion. Waiting For that one. This is one of the most "twisted" things I've ever written. Its like someone's anger being released, and its like from the point of view of a cat...very weird...but I like it. ~Jen~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, from a cat's point of view...  Now you just have to play with it for a while, make sure it's good and dead, then bring it to someone you love's back door, in an offering....a sign of your devotion  |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
It is kinda jumbled but I understood it. Freaky huh. Pretending to be a cat? LOL. This is cute though. I like the whole hiss, scratch, pounce thing. It kinda gives you a good picture. Thanks for the read. Riley ~*I found how to laugh, forgot how to smile, somehow your words, make it all worthwhile*~ |
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boy and his spirit Junior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 41within my heart |
I didnt quite find this twisted. maybe short and stupid? (edited by moderator) [This message has been edited by vlraynes (11-19-2002 12:00 AM).] |
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wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa |
this was good. So you want someone that kills people with ya? thats kinda twisted but alright...it was good way to take on a different personality all together " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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