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Teen Poetry #6

Rose Petal Red

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

0 posted 2002-11-15 08:59 AM

Even though your gone
I remain in wait
Bleeding roses of love;
Alas the blood is mine
My hands bleed rose petals
Thorns tear my flesh and
I love you for it.
You made me live again and
I love you for it.
I forever smell of roses and
I love you for it.
Red fragrance curls under my nose
From your rose in my hands
Your rose will never die;
Even if you did
My love for you
Keeps its petals red as
The rose blood washes away
In the rain.
I loved you and
I love you now
I am happy;
Your red rose tells me
That wherever you are;
You love me back.

[This message has been edited by Darkness (11-15-2002 09:02 AM).]

BrokenAngel
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA

1 posted 2002-11-15 01:41 PM

Wow. I love it. I can also relate to it. Only the man who has made me feel much like you feel right now I'm tryin to get back with. Wonderful write! Keep it up and hope everything goes better.

Don't ever let the rose die, if you never get him back, thats all you will have of him.

~*~*~Night Angel

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2002-11-19 05:37 PM

Darkness~
I like this piece very much.
It's beautifully penned and I just enjoyed the feel of it.
Nicely done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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