»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #6
»
Orchestral Freedom
| Teen Poetry #6 |
|
Orchestral Freedom |
|
|
Winston Froom Junior Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 32 |
Orchestral Freedom [But life is much more than Revolver though, isn't it?] -------o-------0-----o--------0------o--------0----- Well, I'm free as in freedom, yeah. Well, I'm wise as in wisdom, right. So I might have not arrived at Heathrow, but I'm at half the distance of what I want to say. Far too much of slanting my eyes to my neck. While my mind is panting from a creative wreck. Man, I'm in the freedom to say: Out of all the Four, I've always loved George the most. No more pentametric thought, because I'm free as in freedom; because I'm wise as in wisdom, Right! |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Winston Froom - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I rarely take a peek in here..and I must say I love your Poem and I enjoy The Beatles as well..as much for critiquing this I'm sorry I can't lol..all I can say is that I enjoyed it  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
||
|
wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa |
That was a very good poem...i am not the best at critiqing so you get off of that...i look forward to more of your work " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
||
|
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Winston~ I'm really enjoying your creative style. Nicely done, my friend. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
