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jennilynn
Junior Member

since 2002-11-11

Posts 29
here with me

0 posted 2002-11-13 11:07 PM

Nobody's Angel

I can't take anymore.
Everythings gona way too far.
Please just end it now.
Take away all the pain and misery.
Betrayed by so many.
Leaving me alone,
To fight battles that can't be won.
Theres no one left
that cares whether I live ot die.
And I am dying,
A slow, painful death.
Broght on by those who claim to love me.
But they don't.
In order for them to give a damn,
I have to give a lot in return.
And I don't have anything left to give.
Its all gone.
Nothing left but my cold, empty body.
A body with no soul,
No fire to keep it going.
The flame was put out
by all the lies and betrayal
that I got from all the people
that I loved.
But they're all gone now.
I've pushed myself to the edge and back
Trying to please everyone.
Everyone but myself.
Theres nowhere to go,
No one to turn to.
Cuz now,
I'm nobody's angel

This isn't the best thing I've ever written, but it does capture how I felt at the time. Hope ya like it.
~Jen~

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-11-13 11:17 PM

Welcome! and it was a very emotional piece...let's be careful though, suicidal poems are not allowed...(check the guidelines) but I don't think you go that far here, just saying to be careful is all....I understand the feelings here, and I hope to see more from you, something happy (teasing you) Please, enjoy yourself read , reply and do share more with us, oh and check your email for a special greeting!

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

2 posted 2002-11-14 01:42 PM

Oh wow this hit home. Very good by the way. If this isn't one of your best I can't wait to see your others.

Welcome

Darkness

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-11-19 04:54 PM

jennilynn~
Welcome to Passions.
This is a nicely written piece and you've done
an excellent job of expressing these emotions.
I truly felt this as I read.
I look forward to reading lots more from you.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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