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lil cherry
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0 posted 11-12-2002 09:53 PM       View Profile for lil cherry   Email lil cherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lil cherry

Though roses may be red
And violets may be blue
That doesnít mean that I can still love you

You ripped out my heart
And threw it on the floor
I really donít think that I can take this anymore

The pain that you have caused
Will never go away
Because that day I cried when you said you wouldnít stay

You came back to me
Asking for forgiveness
And although I want to I donít think that I can give this

I looked into your eyes
And stared up at your face
And wished that we could return to that happy place

But I know thatís not possible
I know our loves not true
But I still spend everyday wanting to be with you

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1 posted 11-12-2002 10:09 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

aww, this is incredibly sad, and incredibly powerful. *hugs*

I am a Knight who says Ni!

majnu
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2 posted 11-12-2002 10:18 PM       View Profile for majnu   Email majnu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for majnu

yep been there. your words are too true.

-majnu
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palmerj
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3 posted 11-13-2002 12:27 AM       View Profile for palmerj   Email palmerj   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for palmerj

It seems like many have been there, including myself its a horrible pain, but like they say time does heal all wounds.  Good Luck!
Sweetpoet16m4u04
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4 posted 11-13-2002 01:33 PM       View Profile for Sweetpoet16m4u04   Email Sweetpoet16m4u04   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sweetpoet16m4u04

Very powerful and emotional write. I know i'm also one of those that can relate to this unfortunately. Keep writing you obviously have some talent.

Chris
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5 posted 05-07-2004 12:08 AM       View Profile for kissa~rachelle   Email kissa~rachelle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kissa~rachelle

wow.. very powerful. I love this, and i am amazed at your bility to say no..i wish i was that strong, maybe i will be someday. i loved this poem, very amazing write.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

 
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