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"I know..."

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Sweetpoet16m4u04
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0 posted 11-11-2002 06:56 PM       View Profile for Sweetpoet16m4u04   Email Sweetpoet16m4u04   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sweetpoet16m4u04


I Know…
I know that you and I can never be,
Because that would mean my dreams have become reality.
I know you don’t feel the way that I do,
But having you on my mind makes my skies so blue.

I know its hard showing you how I feel,
But if you can give me a chance I can guarantee they’re real.
I know we will probably end up being just good friends,
But I want much more than that so seeing you will never end.

I still know that after you read this nothing will change,
Even though I yearn for it to happen, I have to survive the pain.
I know my quest for love has to go on,
And I know hopefully it will happen before your gone
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NSnaomian
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since 07-22-2002
Posts 237
In my troll closet I be


1 posted 11-11-2002 07:05 PM       View Profile for NSnaomian   Email NSnaomian   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NSnaomian

Aww, that was good. Personally I'm not much for rhyming, but in this case, the point of what you are saying blocked it out. Loved it, great job!

Laura

"I have seen what a laugh can do. It can transform almost unbearable tears into something bearable, even hopeful."
-Bob Hope-

Ina
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since 10-09-2000
Posts 1331
Quebec, Canada


2 posted 11-11-2002 09:07 PM       View Profile for Ina   Email Ina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ina

any one who can rythm....i applaude...(cuz i cant) i enjoyed your poem. i think this is the first one ive read from you. keep writing. i hope your feelings are reciprocated

Darkness
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since 10-17-2002
Posts 208
The place just beyond my eyes,


3 posted 11-12-2002 01:59 PM       View Profile for Darkness   Email Darkness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Darkness

I loved the rythum of this piece. It kept my attention and got your point out strongly. If you wrote this especially for that someone whose supposed to read it. Good Luck.

Darkness
kissa~rachelle
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since 11-27-2003
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nowhere special


4 posted 01-20-2004 10:44 PM       View Profile for kissa~rachelle   Email kissa~rachelle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kissa~rachelle

  
   This one hits really close to home. I have a friend i feel that way for too, and he has a girlfriend at the moment for one, and secondly, he knows how i feel, and he told me that he didnt want to screw our friendship up. We are realy close, and so i guess i can see where he's coming from, but it still hurts. I can feel ya, 100 percent there! I actually wrote a poem about it, in TEEN POETRY # 7, its called "Just Friends" if ya wanna check it out. I really loved this poem. Definitely going in my library thingymabopper! lol
~kissa~

**~kissa~**
*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

 
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