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reposting my last 3 poems again
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reposting my last 3 poems again |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I have no more inspiration to write.It's been a year I believe since I wrote the last one.Everything in me is stagnant and probably dead.So, I'm just going to share some of my last poems to the new members.I hope you enjoy. A Memory of Forgotten Dreams Angelic voice thru silence of melancholy nights Oh virgin silhouette floating on gentle breeze A sight..... Yes..... a sight that in brilliance of skies lit blue And pearls that shine..... thus greet all with subtle delight Reddened lips surrounded of passion’s untold Magnificent crown’s lost in waves of seas An essence... aromatic wonder of redolent garden blossoms What lustrous..... timeless..... flawless sheath of silk and gold These are images carved on this, a lover’s theme Still cold to your touch of sweet caress So again..... I trance wistfully into this, a gentle slumber For you my love..... are nothing but..... “a memory of forgotten dreams” ____________________________________________________________________ Twilight's Serenade Serenaded by stars thru peaceful twilight In dreams alone you dance upon moonlit clouds What moment set amidst this, a tranquil night A Flower’s bow… ‘Tis a gracious ovation endowed Elegance kept in this gentle prance Sways a subtle waltz adrift an emulous crescent-light Amongst the skies gliding, leaving a hypnotic trance A terpsichorean born... Oh, what heavenly beauty in sight This ambience set by such radiant charm A gracious smile donned, curing a lover’s pride Paramount guise in painting bestowing an ivory sight Truly an angel… My immaculate rose of eventide ________________________________________________________________ A Moment’s Time A realm built on expressive words, and that of undiscovered sounds. Voices of my affection said in such stillness, meant never to be known..., ...and not even to be ever heard. Oh beauty cherished by the unsung, and the barer of my untold. You are the imagination of one’s desire, the untouched silhouette in my dreams. The mirage dancing in the breeze then quickly taken away by the wind. I shall wait till my moment’s end has past, be your forsaken hoping it won’t last. I shall live in the hands of death, be searching until I breathe my last breath. You are she who shines ever so bright, and thus color the moon with gracious light. You are she who warms my heart you see, my beautiful and only mighty Aphrodite. là où est mon amour? donde está mi amour? wo ist meine Liebe? Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo. [This message has been edited by Acies (11-11-2002 05:05 PM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Acies~ I can certainly relate to the frustration of dealing with a missing muse. I do hope yours finds it's way home soon. Meanwhile, I'm glad you decided to share some of your past work with us.  These are all three very beautifully written, and I truly enjoyed reading them. Extremely well penned, my friend. How about trying one of the Teen Challenges. That might help tease your muse into cooperating again. It's worth a shot and it might even be fun. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
As poets we are all mortal. Perhaps what you need is a rebirth... consider learning another language, writing in that one for a while. I've found that helpful. Try new styles, new formats... read a lot of poetry, old and new... I think eventually you'll find yourself once again able to articulate the world poetically. However, if you'd rather just give in, that's fine. The choice is yours, Acire, but I hate to see a good poet go to waste... and work like you've posted above does make me think that you are, very certainly, a good poet. So long, my friend. Parasite Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored. |
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BrokenAngel Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 141Puryear, TN, USA |
When ever I get writer's block I just normally sit down with a pen and some paper and start writting down whats goin on, normally somethin comes out of it, may not be the best, but when your commin out of a block, nothin is gonna be your best. Hope you get out of it, great writes!! ~*~*~Night Angel |
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