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foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

0 posted 2002-11-10 10:29 PM

Why are you always like this?
You yell and you scream and you shake your fist.
I'm too young to do this.
Too young to do that.
You won't even let me call myself fat.
No make-up for you.
I don't care what you think.
Don't wear purfume I'm allergic to the "stink".
So I ask what can I do?
Why can't I be me?
Do all these things.
Just let me be free.
Fo1r once just listen to me.
Ever got in an arguement with your mom???

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

1 posted 2002-11-10 10:39 PM

hey,
i no what u mean and u aint fat
but its almost some law that u have to fight w/ ur mom
idk y but it is stupid that moms and daughters fight so much at least me and my mom do,
sometimes its just better when i am by mysle fand they dotn talk to em u know?? but then sometimes u really want them to talk to u
but anywayz enough rambling
this was awesome
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

2 posted 2002-11-11 12:06 PM

I can really relate 2 this, my mom and I get into a arguement at least once a night. this was good. nice job

You can close your eyes to things you dont want to see,but u cant close your heart to things you dont want to feel.

SuperSonic
Junior Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 16
Northern Ireland

3 posted 2002-11-11 07:54 AM

I hate my mom, she's a real bytch, and this poem is pretty easy to relate to. Short and sweet. good stuff!

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

4 posted 2002-11-13 11:00 AM

tsk, respect your elders, dear.

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

5 posted 2002-11-14 08:09 AM

LOL We all fight with our moms man. Its kinda funny cause they have lost their cattyness because they are our elders as LP says. LOL So they fight like old ladies...LOL
Don`t tell my mommy I said that!
*Allison*

EleanorMoonbaby
Member

since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

6 posted 2002-11-14 03:35 PM

Not a bad write.... one, I think, we can all identify with, especially me! Put it this way, my mother can start an argument in an empty room, and frequently lets me know just how much of an embarrassment I am to her..... anyways, I'd better go before I start on a whinge-fest.
Ellie

High above the mucky-muck, castle made of clouds; there sits Wonderboy, sitting oh so proudly....

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

7 posted 2002-11-14 08:49 PM

lol, i dont have to call myself fat, my mom does it for me.

NE way.. yea I liked this- any teen agefgirl would, being EVERYONE (seriously) that i know has fought with thier mom at least once.

Stink... a lot of stuff stinks man.. but sumtimes, stuff stinks in a good way-- i'd explain but u'd get mad. lol j/j.
OMG man.. my mom sucks, she made me clean a cat box!!! lmao!

Good write- i like this.
(lol allison- they fight like old ladies!! My mom lies, so its easy to make her guilty

)
Ttyt

!sara!

[This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (11-14-2002 08:52 PM).]

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