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dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

0 posted 2002-11-10 05:38 PM

(getting myself ready for when i see 8 mile thanksgiving weekend!!!

amanda is kool)

i saw you staring at her
my sudden heartache no one could cure
your hand in hers
my heart torn out
but thats not what love is about
i didnt want to be by you
all the stories you told were untrue
us together forever,
nothing could be better
is what you said
but on her shoulder rest your head
we are no more,
with every decision i make,
i am unsure
you were the light,
that made everything alright

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

1 posted 2002-11-10 06:38 PM

i liked this sam

i no itz about marshall o0o0o0o baby

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

2 posted 2002-11-10 06:50 PM

OMG, man.. Cathy and her smilies.. I just cant take it!!!

Yea.. Anyway, to your poem.

I liked this poem. and POEM is in bold because it was, in fact, a poem, a poem in which I liked.

It broke away from all the rap-ish stuff you've written before...
and by the way... even though you're in love with Marshall, and what not, (lol, do i sound funny?) doesn't mean you have to write like him ... and I'm not saying that your poems (heehee) suck or anything, because i like them, but yea- evolve into your own person.. la la la la la
Do i sound like a counselor?
I think I do. ha ha ha ha ha SHOOT ME!
yea- anyway.. Sorry for rambling, but I think it's fun!!! You should ramble in my replies, okay? okay!

Great write..
ttys!!

~sara~

"It's something I have to do..I was there too..before everything else..I was like you.."
!nin!
.the.fragile.

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

3 posted 2002-11-10 06:54 PM

OH yea.. this reminds me of that one guy... who likes that one band.. that you get mad at me about when i talk about him alllll the time.. ya kno him??

I'm glad u wrote it.. you got me thinking..

This thing scares me, though. it reminds me of this one dream i had.. but instad of getting happy.. it ate me!!

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

4 posted 2002-11-10 07:29 PM

lmao sara u r hilarious!!get back from eatin your pumpkin pie already!!!

and yes sam amanda is the kewlest!!you will only see me replyin now so ttyl!!!i dont no now i like this smiley too!!

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

5 posted 2002-11-10 08:48 PM

I like it..I love when people break away from their regular style. You did very well with this one....But I`m confused...Who`s amanda?

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

6 posted 2002-11-10 08:55 PM

I actually wasn`t finished but I pressed submit reply instead of the smilies. But it was sposed to say:
Who`s amanda?

I`m not feelin so well..I have this gay cold that my mom gave me..

Also I was readin one of your away messages (cathy) and it said that you and angela katie and sam saw The Ring..Which katie were u talkin bout? cause katie kaiser said that she didnt go wit u guys...I am s bit confused..

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