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0 posted 2002-11-09 09:17 AM


All My Life "
(07/11/02)
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Verse 1
Each rainy day I'd write the same story,
Concurning love build by my fantasy.
About how Isaw the meaning of it,
How two people who loved and shared should live.
Cause I used to spent moments with lonely,
And I used to bathe in my misery.
But then something happend I lost my blue,
Was it a dream or was it really true.

Chorus
All my life,
I've lived for someone like you.
But never imagined this day
Would ever, come true.
All my life,
I've been wond'ring what to say.
But you stole my breath before I
Could ever, explain.
Just how I feel deep inside,
Each moment, all the time.
All my life...

Verse 2
Since we first touched I've been feeling secure,
No more crying no more tears like before.
Now I only read the same old stories,
With a big smile with some great memories.
Just how would I manage without your heart,
To pull me out of the all scary dark.
You're the open arms I can run to,
Tell me who needs the world when I got you.

Chorus (x2)

© Copyright 2002 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-10 12:37 PM


Oh, I like this one Brian... a bit more simple than your others, but that probably gives it a lot of room for guitar solos, whatever... hehe.  Really liked the way you started the first verse... it's hard to start poetry, like I always say...

Would love to hear this sometime.  If you ever get signed, do tell us.  

Parasite

Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored.
~Aldous Huxley

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