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foreverwithyou
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since 2002-10-20
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Wonderland

0 posted 2002-11-08 07:18 PM



You've moved away from me.
Far away.
Now I don't see you everyday.
It's hard without you.
I'll never get along.
I don't know how to.
I can't believe you're gone.
You may have known my true feelings.
Maybe I knew yours.
But it's to late now.
I'll never see you anymore.

This is about this dude and he moved and now I dont go to school with him anymore.



"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

[This message has been edited by foreverwithyou (11-08-2002 07:19 PM).]

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Alone Afraid n' Away
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since 2002-10-28
Posts 19

1 posted 2002-11-08 07:50 PM


Cathy this poem was GOOD G!
I liked it.............................................................................................................................................(oh yea and i know thats its about spiney)

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
I am everywhere
2 posted 2002-11-08 09:54 PM


You know what--- you should DL this one NIN song... yea. lol
good poem.
Sorry.. It sucks when people move. Jeremy almost moved- even tho i hate him- i'd miss him.. in a way. lol

take care

Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
Posts 419

3 posted 2002-11-09 09:12 AM


I like this one very much, sorry for your loss though...
devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28
Posts 571

4 posted 2002-11-09 10:51 AM


I liked it.....SPINEY MOVED??
                *Allison*

devinechild22
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5 posted 2002-11-09 12:25 PM


I do have a bit of somethin to say but i dont want u to take it the wrong way..KK?
Local Parasite
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Transylconia, Winnipeg
6 posted 2002-11-10 12:41 PM


I know how this is.  When I was very young my best friend moved away... to a small town called Pine Falls.  Just this year I met someone who said he was from Pine Falls and I asked if he knew my friend, and apparently the guy was his best pal... haha... freaky how that works.

But just because someone's moving away doesn't mean you'll never get the chance to talk to them again.  Reunions are always such a great opportunity to get to know someone better.   Be patient.

Parasite

Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored.
~Aldous Huxley

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