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Purple Visions
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Purple Visions |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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I don't know whether this is too late... but let's give it a try... Purple Visions Visions are always important. In a prairie of flowers, Violet blooms with purple skylight, I see hope with royal duty Accompanying by faith- even Night is gorgeous, when Surrender to mauve ink- O Gracious site... for a walk. //my english name is Vivian So. Please comment on it. I will be very glad to hear. Eliza Simmons ~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore. [This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (11-09-2002 08:27 PM).] |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Oh, I can't believe this got lost in time... hah... well, I'm replying to it now.  I really like this... very cool use of colour in the imagery. I really like the use of ellipsis in the last line. "For a walk." Very, very nice... You've done an excellent job here and answered the challenge well. Parasite |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ooo very nice. It is never too late to answer a challenge and I'm most glad that you did. While this is short you still have some beautiful lines and imagery floating around in it. You've answered the challenge well. Thanks for posting it.  ~AF~ Don't steal - the Government hates competition. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Vivian~ This is beautiful, my friend. You've done an excellent job of answering the challenge. I enjoyed this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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