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NSnaomian
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since 2002-07-22
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0 posted 2002-11-07 09:00 PM



I know I love you,
I guess I’ll move on.
I just want you to have it,
The happiness you had,
When you were with me.
We shared our dreams,
Of being together,
Apart,
Whatever the time called for.
Just promise me,
You’ll keep your glow,
Your light for all to see.
So one day a girl will come along,
Take you under her wing,
And give you what you need.
I know I love you,
I guess I’ll just move on


I kind of was not sure what to do with this. PLz, lemme know what you think, Thanks!

Laura

"I have seen what a laugh can do. It can transform almost unbearable tears into something bearable, even hopeful."
-Bob Hope-

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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
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1 posted 2002-11-07 10:04 PM



Sometimes... some people cant glow without someone else..

but good write.

Local Parasite
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2 posted 2002-11-13 11:08 AM


Aw, touching... but it's best that you move on in such a situation.

Good write.

Parasite

Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored.
~Aldous Huxley

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