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Teen Poetry #6

uninspired

laconic
Member

since 2002-02-17

Posts 64
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-11-07 08:16 AM

this a form born from the uninspired
lack lustre and lost no message is sired
just a simple rhyme within rhythm and time
floating out there on the tip of the mind
it takes no picture in the form of the word
just simple blankness creating its birth
this is uninspiration if ever i knew
when blue font fills no space its spoken its truth
can it you hear it? of course you cant
this is uninspiration...get it

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

1 posted 2002-11-07 08:24 AM

Hey

Luke? Right? Judging from the little thing and yea....ok....back to the poem. Hehe. This was cool. I mean the uninspiration thing kinda gave you inspiration. Thats cool. :P.

Riley

~*Pain strikes my heart, water drips down my face, I now stand in front of you, full of shame and disgrace*~

Faye
Junior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 14
The world of Dreams&Memories

2 posted 2002-11-07 12:01 PM

How ioronic. And how true.

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

3 posted 2002-11-07 01:24 PM

I thaught this was very cool. I have done something similar. I wrote a poem about how hard it was to write a poem. Very good choice of words and it was a good flow and a quick read.

Ma-va-lis.
Darkness

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

4 posted 2002-11-07 10:04 PM

*poke* hey... I like it

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