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Honey
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since 2001-10-09
Posts 92
Hot girl From Canada

0 posted 2002-11-07 12:16 PM



I was always there for you
I wiped away your tears when you cried,
I lifted you up
When you wanted to die.

I lent a sympathetic ear
And listed to your words,
I always thought it was funny
How one of mine you never heard.

I gave up my time
To see you through the worst,
I did it because you were my friends
And I didnt want to see you hurt.

I wanted to help you
Because thats what friends are for,
But you used me as your doormat
So why should I care anymore?

Why is it when I have a bad day
And I need you to listen,
I just need someone to talk to
When the tears on my cheeks glisten.

You are all just to busy
To hear what I have to say,
You only care about me
When YOU have a bad day.

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

He Who Laughs Last Thinks Slowest!!

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Darkness
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since 2002-10-17
Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.
1 posted 2002-11-07 01:36 PM


This poem was good... no wait great!!! I absolutely loved the whole flow and rhyme scheme. I could also relate to it to. Some of my old friends did that so gave them the big FU and got new ones.

Great write!!

Darkness

NSnaomian
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since 2002-07-22
Posts 232
In my troll closet I be
2 posted 2002-11-07 07:29 PM


Nice job with this. Soooo true yet soooo sad. I'm truely sorry, and glad to say that I haven't come across one like that. I try my best to help out when I can and most people around me are ready to listen if I need help on something. Sooo...sorry.
Great job, I loved it! Keep comin.

Laura

"I have seen what a laugh can do. It can transform almost unbearable tears into something bearable, even hopeful."
-Bob Hope-

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3 posted 2002-11-07 09:56 PM


*sigh* boy do I know this one. I was never really able to put it into words though. *hugs*
Local Parasite
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4 posted 2002-11-13 11:05 AM


Yeah, I know the feeling.  It really sucks having to be the local shoulder, and I was in the same situation as well recently... sometimes it can seem like nobody cares about you, which can be tough, but maybe you just need to take some time away from them...

Good luck.

Parasite

Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored.
~Aldous Huxley

Sweetpoet16m4u04
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since 2002-11-10
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Ma, U.S.A
5 posted 2002-11-13 01:27 PM


Awwww this was a great write. It also is quite sad and its awful that those type of people are out there it really is. But if you ever need someone to be there for you you can count on me!!!

Chris

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