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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
Children playing and smiling, Friendly voices are the only sound around her. Hope is what she felt, Now she trusts no one and hates all. The last thing she ever said to her own mother was: I can't stay here take me with you, Mama why are you driving away from me? MAMA! Now crying the little girl tries to follow, But a mile away she faints. People crowding around her, Hardle giving her room to breathe. They're worried so they wait until she gets up. She awakes but she's not relived. Terrified, She runs as far as she can away from the crowd. Tears run down her cheeks, She wants to find a person who actually loved her. But all she could see is lies. This little girl is condemned, To live in this world full of hate and decite. Screams piercing through her mind, Will leave an effect that will stay forever. She wants a home, But her mother never loved her. Mama where did you go I need you! She reached into her bag and grabbed a knife. She sliced her arms, Blood rushed upon her two hands. What did i ever do? As the girl remembers the last thing her mother said to her: Your a mistake leave me alone! And those words left a scar on her fragile heart. |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
 Please tell me that didn't happen to you |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
Oh no no no....I never happened to me...I have a mother who kinda loves me...LOL I'm just kidding... Well actually i wrote this poem because I found out that writing dark,sad poems are my natural talent! I had ALOT of inspiration for this poem... It's a band called Hoobastank...Their music motivated me to write this...But mostly the songs remember me,crawling in the dark,and running away. So no you don't have to be all sad for me...I'm actually just fine...For once im actually happy! Impossible yes I know...LOL... ttyl |
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Darkness Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies. |
This was yet another good one from the fabulous Polita. I don't know but it seems we write similar I wrote a poem with the same theme. You might want to check it out it's called Playground I posted it a while back so you might have to look a little hard. Great one! Keep writing. Darkness |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
this is cool. I thought oh no, tell me this haven't happened to you. And I find it  good write. may peace be with you.Eliza Simmons |
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PrincessNets Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 103NewYork, USA |
I know you don't know me, but I am glad that didn't really happen to you. I am amazed at how well your poem is written. I really enjoyed reading this poem... not because I think that these horrible things happening to people is great, but because it made me feel like crying. I always love reading literature that makes me feel emotions. Great Poem, keep writing! -Jeanette- |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
Wow, thats horrible. No no no! Not the poem, the topic hehe=-P On your part, you did great; in finding the words to tell it and having it come out so well. Good work! Laura "I have seen what a laugh can do. It can transform almost unbearable tears into something bearable, even hopeful." |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
Aww thank you peoples! I'm glad that so many people read my work! I thought that I wasn't gonna meet anyone else except for Local Parasite, Darkness, KnightlyShadows,Android17,Cherish,Skyfire. They're really nice people and today will be awesome...I get to burn a cd today after school! |
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