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NSnaomian
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In my troll closet I be

0 posted 2002-11-06 07:41 PM



Sorry this is a lil late, but I just noticed the challenge today..hehe
Here I go.

Now and then,
Someone comes along,
not noticing my face
at all. Though there are some
occurences when I get my share,
my comfort from
individuality to partnership.
All my life I've been alone but
no one respected me like you.

Yay!

Real friends are those who, when you feel you've made a fool of yourself, don't feel you've done a permanent job.

© Copyright 2002 Laura - All Rights Reserved
foreverwithyou
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Wonderland
1 posted 2002-11-06 08:25 PM


I liked this one

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

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2 posted 2002-11-07 04:18 AM


Oooh, I like, I like Challenge definately met, and it wasn't late at all, so dont' apologise

I'm so cute!

Local Parasite
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3 posted 2002-11-08 11:11 AM


Oh, very nicely done.  Your username is so weird, I have no clue what it's supposed to mean... haha...

Loved the acrostic though.  Nice work.

Parasite

NSnaomian
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4 posted 2002-11-09 11:03 AM


Well it doesn't really mean anything. I used to play a game where my character name what Naomian Stargazer. I met so many people through it and none of them liked my real name...well they like Naomian better...so NS is for Nao Star and then the name. Get it? Don't really know why I put the NS in there, but yah. Hehe.
Thats my story...and a sad one at that =-P

Laura

"I have seen what a laugh can do. It can transform almost unbearable tears into something bearable, even hopeful."
-Bob Hope-

vlraynes
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5 posted 2002-11-11 04:34 PM



NSnaomian~
This is very nicely done.
I really enjoyed reading it, and it's a
wonderful response to the challenge.
Thanks for participating and I hope to see
you on the next one as well.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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