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clumsy
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since 2002-10-10
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0 posted 2002-11-05 10:32 AM


jesus told me that
i had three days to
get it together, i'm
sorry i took me four.


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1 posted 2002-11-06 12:50 PM


Your title?  Yep, they're just words.

I don't know what you're trying to say.  Maybe I don't know you well enough to understand... but a good property of poetry is to try and understand the restriction of your audience, so that's your fault...

heh... well... I won't enjoy this until I know what it was about... so if you wouldn't mind sharing, I'd love to hear it.

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clumsy
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since 2002-10-10
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canada.
2 posted 2002-11-06 06:35 PM


dear local parasite or anyone else who cares:
it's about me failing, and having a chance at something but i chose to loose it and chose to do something i'll forever regret, and although jesus might have saved me, that's what people say, i don't believe it myself.

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